Introduction To My Final Essay

Youth Sports are on the rise in America! About one in three youth participate in contact sports. However, the other two thirds of the youth spend more time indoors tied up in sitting activities than in former years, but that creates an unhealthy lifestyle for the youth. Childhood obesity has risen since the former years where kids ride their bikes and play contact sports. It is important that America’s youth begin to form habits that will guarantee a healthy future. Schools that call for mandatory gym classes are in a place to help. Youth sports help children develop strength and endurance, learn cooperation and teamwork, and improve self-confidence. Critics claim that today’s youth risks outweigh the benefits because playing a contact can lead to concussions and other pains on your body. Supporters like myself of youth sports disagree.

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Four Pillars of Argument

The Thesis statement of the essay “College Is a Waste of Time” by Dale Stephens is the sentence College is expensive in paragraph 4. The author supported his thesis with evidence in the same paragraph. The evidence he used in that same paragraph was stating that the College Board Policy Center found that the cost of college university tuition is about 3.6 times higher than it was 30 years ago. In Paragraph 5, the author stated that are alternatives to college and people shouldn’t depend on college and he is starting a social movement called “UnCollege”. The refutation the author used was stating that a major function of college is that it is a way potential employers that one is qualified to work; supporting that evidence like Employers are recruiting off social media and work sites. Finally, the concluding statement the author stated was “We who take our education outside and beyond the classroom understand how actions build a better world. We will change the world regardless of the l

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Hello my name is Joe Sanders and I’m a Georgia Gwinnett College student. My major is Business Administration. I’m a cool and chill person. My hobbies are playing sports, and video games in my spare time. Some of my interests are getting good grades in college, spending time with friends and family, and listening to music. My friends say I can make anyone laugh so I guess I have an interest in comedy. My expectations for 2018 is to get all A’s in my classes and hopefully earn some scholarship and hopefully go on to losing all my college debt and graduate with multiple degrees.

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